First day at school


05/10/2021


Hello, did you ever have a different day on your first day of school? 
No, neither do I but I liked myself a little more than usual, here is my day…

Hello, my name is Alejandro and I'm from USA today was my first day of classes. 
I was very nervous because I have new teachers and new 
classmates but I was able to adapt quickly 
during the first class they introduced me to my new tutor and
all my classmates introduced themselves. 
After that I have class with the English teacher who was very funny and 
I liked him from the first day but that fun would not last long since the next class I 
have class with the social teacher who the truth does not dislike me but 
I feel better the previous one since the current one is very serious, 
After that I had lenguage and everything was normal, 
I saw that the teacher was relaxed but a bit strict so 
I think I won't have many problems with she. 
At recess, as I was in virtuality, I just went to rest for a while and 
then came back for the fourth hour in which I had technology, 
so it was the time that I had the most fun,
 after that I had music and art that I like but it was normal.

This day was a lot of fun because I was able to make new friends and 
meet very funny teachers, so I think I will do very well in class and 
that it will be very entertaining.





Comments

  1. Cindy ChOctober 6, 2021 at 6:23 AM

    Your blog was very interesting and easy to read, you used the sensory details very well and I could imagine how Alejandro felt on his first day of school, however I'd recommend putting more details about Alejandro's culture so we can get to know him a little more.

    Cinthya Chung IV PAI C

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  2. Miguel SoriaOctober 6, 2021 at 6:43 AM

    It is a good blog but it is a little bit confusing for example in the introduction it had very confusing phrasing because I do not know what a “different day in your first day of school” but getting past the weird phrasing from what I understood this has a very good story telling because it makes sense and the points that it is trying to show are clear and it had me very focused although it was missing a few more jokes but it really was a good blog the only thing to improve here is the phrasing because at time I had to read over and over but it was a good blog just needs a bit of polishing
    Miguel SOria

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  3. Dome ReyesOctober 6, 2021 at 9:32 AM

    Hi Marce,

    I imagine how Alejandro felt on his first day and in a new school where he didn't know anyone.
    It is difficult, but time goes by and you adapt to a new place and make friends.

    I like your blog, you follow the structure, you use a correct grammar, is easy to read, to understanding.

    Congratulations Marce

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  4. MathiOctober 6, 2021 at 6:46 PM

    I liked it because it has a good story and it is short, the best thing is that it is easier to understand and I liked your blog.

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